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| Author | Topic: sitam ye bahut khoob tha......... |
| rehana soz |
posted 12/31/05 9:59 AM
qasim saheb....asalam o alikum..aapki nazm humzad padhi....kho gaii hoon mai us sach may jo aapke khwab may tha chupa...waqi vo humzad ab mil gaya...poochoongi tu ne aisa kyon kiya........mai nadan thi tujh se anjan thi...per khuda se kuch na chupa.....phir ye sitam kyon kar mujh per....tere saath ne haseen khwab tou diye...nafs ki zad may sailaab aate rahe.......kaash tu ek baar rubaru hota agar.......tujh se poochte aye jadugar.......tune ye karam mujh per kyon kiya....meri ankh se haq taabir ka chin kyon liya... bahut khoob munir....... mukhlis rehana soz |
| Munir Qasim |
posted 1/1/06 5:02 AM
Sooz..... aap comments kaisay likhti hoo. Kaheen khoo jaati ho kia.... aisay lagta hay jaisay khud say batain kar rahi hoo..... aap ka her message aik nazm hay. Thanks for appriciation... |
| rehana soz |
posted 1/1/06 12:03 AM
qasim saheb...ye humzaad her ek saath hai.....phir kho kyon na jaayen nazm may......mai bhi is sehar se bach na saki..humzaad ka jadu chal hi gaya...aapki nazm may mujhe jawab mil gaya....shukriya.... rehana soz |
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