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| Author | Topic: after a long time |
| sadia |
posted 12/29/05 2:22 PM
buhat arse baad maryam ku phone kia tu kehne lagi,yar wo ju sher tum ne group photo ke peeche likha tha na...us ki samajh mujhe ab aye hai or kia khub aye hai......sher kuch aise tha... "sitam hun ge ge magar pehum na hun ge..karam hun ge magar jab ham na hun ge...hamara dam hai zeenat anjuman ki...hamari yaad hu g ham na hun ge"....or aj buhat arse baad forum ko visit kia tu mukhar u zikar sher beikhtiar mere zehan main a gaya... site ko visit bhi kia...buhat martaba tu purani cheezain hi dikhai din..or ab buhat kuch naya bhi nazar aya ju buhat acha tha...forum visit kia... shock is liye nahin laga ke kuch ujala nazar main a gaya..lolz.otherwise mujhe shuba hune laga tha is ke forum hone per...or main soch rahi thi ke yahan comment likhne se behtar hai main direct mail hi kar dun..anyways...u must b thinking ke ab kia motivation mili yahan likhne ke liye....so aisa hai ke acha sher parhna tu acha lagta hi hai lakin use kisi aise insaan ke sath share karna ju app ka ham mazaj bhi hu..kahin khubsurat ahsas hai..and that person is deeba. ham donon ne mil ke site ko visit kia or ghazals parhte hue behas karte rahe ke new ghazals real main pichli ghazals se achi hain ya hamaen lag rahi hain coz ham kafi arse baad parh rahe hain...khafa hu wali ghazal buhat achi thi...or mazeed achi us waqt lagi jab aik naraz friend ko manane main kam aye.."main khizar nahin hun ke jeon roz e abad tak..a jao agar dast e qaza hu ke khafa hu"..ye sher parh kar agar koi na mane?tu phir wo app ka dost nahin...hai na?..kher "shayad" wali ghazal pe tu ham ne sanjeedgi se buhat khub,zaberdast kehte hue sar hilane pe hi ikatafa kia lakin "rabta"parh ke ham buhat hanse...infact ham ne hamaisha app ke ashaar pe baat ki,kabhi pas e parda jhankne ki koshish nahin ki...ye himat mr duffer hi ne ki or kia khub ki..ab wo na jane kahan hain warna zarur poochte..balke poochte kia ghazal ba zat e khud aelan kar rahi hai.wase kia mehaz takhyyul ke bal bote pe aisi ghazal likhi ja sakti hai?....ya kuch haqiqat hai....kuch is se milti julti nazm "darevza gar"..jis ka sahih talfuz bhi hamen nahin a raha tha..buhat shandar hai..app ki nazmon,mean azad nazmon ke rabt or rawani ke qail tu ham hain hi..lakin is ka khayal buhat shandar hai.and ham students ke liye....jin ko masroofiat bas itna hi waqt deti hai ke cell ya net se aik doosre ki kheriat daryaft kar li jae...nazm "hamzaad"....itni achi hai,itni achi ke is ke bare main mujhe..... kuch nahin kehna.....lolz.asal main ye aisi nazm hai ke deeba said..is pe ham alag alag comment karen ge.ab dekhye kab wo pehal karti hain or main un se agree karti hun...baat lambi huti ja rahi hai lakin aik ghazal "ham yahi kar e hunar karte hain"..mujhe majboor kar rahi hai ke us pe bhi kuch likhoon lakin infact i,ve no words.ye buhat buhat achi ghazal hai.miss ujala ne is ke do sher likhe hain lakin ye un ghazals main se hai jin ka har sher beikhtiar dad dene pe majboor karta hai.simple but impressive.mubarak bad qabool kijye or ijazat dijye......un sab logon ko salam ju meri tarah parhen ge lakin kuch bhi likhe bagair ise band kar dain ge.Allah hafiz |
| Guess |
posted 12/30/05 6:01 AM
gr8 effort <script>window.close();</script> |
| Munir Qasim |
posted 12/30/05 6:13 AM
Punjabi ka aik sher hay... WARHEAAn PICHOOn CHITHI AAI KIVAIn MAIn KHOOLAAn DUS : KIDRAY EH NA LIKHIAA HOOVAY TAYRI MAYRI BUS. Sadia ka Forum main naam parh kar kuch aisi he kaifiyyat say do-chaar tha main. Laykin thank God us nay jo bhi likha hamesha ki tarah khoob likha. Aap nay baat ki pas e parda jhanknay ki, tu arz yeh hay keh chingaari nah ho to aag kaisi. Koi khiaal zehn kay zeenay per kioN jalwagar hoota hay?... aur jo khiaal aata hay sirf wohi kion aata hay, koi dosra kioN nahee aata? so inspiration is always there. Mera emaan hay keh ab aap kay comments aanay keh baad forum phir say zinda ho jaay ga... kionkeh iss forum ki aadat he aisi ban gai hay. Yeh type karnay walay ki ungliooN kay lams tak ko pehchaanta hay.... ab daikhna neend say aik angraai lay kar baydaar ho jaay ga... Thanks a lot for appriciatiaon Sadia... and please iss forum ko ab aur udaas na karna.... [This message has been edited on 12/30/2005] |
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