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| Author | Topic: honi ho ke rehti hai |
| sadia |
posted 9/8/05 3:22 AM
honi ho ke rehti hai.....ya buhat si duain is ki raah main aar ban jati hain...whatever...is nazm ko perh ker aik bar to is pe iman lane ko jee chahta hai,thats really a great poem...itni achi nazm pe bawajood buhat masroofiat ke mera dil chaha ke main kuch zaroor kahoon....first of al is ki theme,is ka idea buhat acha hai....ideas tu buhat se ache hote hain lakin is taweel nazm main jo rabt,jo rawani or besakhtagi hai bilkul natural lagti hai... or haan tarz e takahtub...buhat khub.. aik baar is nazm ko parhne ke baad...doosri bar main ne calss rostrum pe parha tha,hamare group ki adat thi achi poetry share kerne ki...is nazm ka lehja or andas aisa sada or purkar hai ke buland awaz main sun,ne r perhne ka or hi maza hai.(just try and see)...or nazm ke ikhtatam tak sab larkian sakit ho chuki thin(me too)that was v nice experience..."dedicated to maryam"...aik dam main ne kaha.....wow,great...sab beikhtiyar hans pare....(zindagi ke bare main us ki approach kuch aisi hi thi,behad muhtat,choti choti baton pe tense ho jane wali...or is baat pe ham use khoob hi cherte the)but u know agle din kia houa?maryam ne ye nazm poori class ko sunai....or wo bhi zubani...with complete flow."youn lagta hai ye nazm ya main ne likhi hai ya mere liye likhi gae hai"...us ka kehna tha..or app main se bhi buhat se logon ko aisa laga ho ga...hai na?hamare liye to ye goya aik zarb ul misal ban gaey....'muqadar se mufar kia hai,muqadaar se mufar ki koshishain kia,gham se bachne ke irade kia?...'ham aik doosre ki taraf dekh ker gungunate....ham sab ki diaries main aik mushtarik cheez ,yadon main ik yaad.....ye nazm .yahan mojood tamam shairy main sab se achi hai......salam to al. |
| Munir Qasim |
posted 9/8/05 12:08 AM
Main nay nazam kabhi likhany ki koshish nahe ki aur nah he khud ko nazm goo shair kehta hooN. Mayra maidaan hamesha say ghazal he raha hay, hattakeh agar nazam kay competition main bhi shareek hoona hoota tu musalsal ghazal (aik topic pay tamaam ashaar) he likha karta. Iss nazam ka moamla thoora alag hay. Iss nay khud ko mujh say likhwaya, aur mujhay pata bhi na chala. Sadia kay comments parh kar mujhay laga keh main ghalat tha, mujhay nazm likhni chaheay. Aaj say mayri poetry main aik aur baab ka izafa hoa. Yeh mayri nishaat-e-sania hay, kiounkah pehlay bhi main nay aik khaas waja he say likhna shuru kia tha. Sadia nay iss nazm ko jiss tarah pazeraai di......aisay na koi day sakta hay aur na kisi nay di hoo gi......Mayri aankhain jazba-e-tashakkar say nam hain....keh main iss pzeraai kay laiq nahe tha........ |
| sadaf |
posted 2/25/06 11:38 AM
achi hay |
| Anila |
posted 3/17/06 6:46 AM
I like your poery. Keep it up. |
| sidra |
posted 6/2/06 6:03 AM
hi.....buhat achi lagi.mutassir karne wali.zindagi ki haqiqat se agah karne wali.preshanion main hal batane wali.good |
| Munir Qasim |
posted 10/17/06 4:45 PM
Aik muddat hoi....... loogooN nay ya tu net use karna choor dia ya phir meri shairy parhni choor di..... ya phir meri shairy main shaid ab woh baat nahi rahi jo pehlay hoa karti thi... waja jo bhi ho....forum udaas hay. aur to aur iss forum kay roh e rawaN bhi ab ghaib hain. Mujhay aik nai dunya say roshnaas karanay walay rah main choor kar aisay ghaib hoay hain keh ab saari musafat baykaar dikhaai dayti hay... Main likhooN ga...aur bhi acha....yeh mera aap say wada hay... laykin jab tak aap loogooN ga feed back nah ho.... kia likhooN.... kaisay... kioun aur kis kayleay likhooN.... Please wapas aa jaain.. phir say who basti aabaad kartay hain jo ab khandar honay ko hay. |
| hum tum |
posted 10/21/06 3:45 PM
its really funny.log net use karna nahin chor sakte...haan change zaroor chahye huta hai un ko.or mahinon site pe kuch naya nazar nahin ata.or ju kuch purana hai definitely use parhne ka koi sawab nahin k log usi ko bar bar parhain or wah wah karain.rab rakha. |
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