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| Author | Topic: sunbal ki shaairee |
| aahan |
posted 7/23/05 1:24 PM
assalam o alaikum wa rahmatullah, sunbal ki ghazal bhee shaairee k qawaaid par pooree utatee dikhaee deti hay.khayalaat main bhee aik khas naya pan hay.... "main in aankhon ki banjar khetion main naey kuchh khawab ugana chahtee hoon". iss sher main bahut kuchh hay, shayad isay hasil e ghazal bhee kaha jaa sakta hay. congtulations sunbal for such a good piece of poetry ,just keep it up if u can... regards aahan |
| sadia |
posted 1/3/06 2:44 PM
hi sunbul......i wish ke main tumhen yahan bhi parhun forum pe.hope so jald aisa hu ga....buhat buhat mubarak hu ke tumhari nazm "tum kon hu mere kuch tu kahu" bhi web pe a gae...or tum se pehle tu main khush hun..coz its a gr8 poem really...sakit kar dene wala sawal...or buhat khubsurat andas..jane kesa ahsas hai is main...sab jawab bhi mil jate hain lakin question is still there..or infact yahi is ki khubsurti hai..best of luck. |
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